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Getting Started
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Liminix is very configurable, which can make it initially daunting
especially if you're learning Nix or Linux or networking concepts at
the same time. In this section we build some "worked example" Liminix
images to introduce the concepts. If you follow the examples exactly,
they should work. If you change things as you go along, they may work
differently or not at all, but the experience should be educational
either way.
Liminix is very configurable, which can make it initially quite
daunting, especially if you're learning Nix or Linux or networking
concepts at the same time. In this section we build some "worked
example" Liminix images to introduce the concepts. If you follow the
examples exactly, they should work. If you change things as you go
along, they may work differently or not at all, but the experience
should be educational either way.
.. warning:: The first example we will look at runs under emulation,
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Requirements
************
You will need a reasonably powerful computer running Nix. Devices
that run Liminix are unlikely to have the CPU power and disk space to
be able to build it in situ, so the build process is based around
You will need a reasonably powerful computer running Nix. Target
devices for Liminix are unlikely to have the CPU power and disk space
to be able to build it in situ, so the build process is based around
"cross-compilation" from another computer. The build machine can be
any reasonably powerful desktop/laptop/server PC running NixOS.
Standalone Nixpkgs installations on other Linux distributions - or on
MacOS - also ought to work but are untested.
MacOS, or even in a Docker container - also ought to work but are
untested.
Running in Qemu
***************
You can do this without even having a router to play with.
You can try out Liminix without even having a router to play with.
Clone the Liminix git repository and change into its directory
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nix-shell --run "mips-vm ./result/vmlinux ./result/rootfs"
This starts Qemu emulator with a bunch of useful options, to run
the Liminix configuration you just built. It connects the Liminix
serial console and the `QEMU monitor
This starts the Qemu emulator with a bunch of useful options, to run
the Liminix configuration you just built. It connects the emulated
device's serial console and the `QEMU monitor
<https://www.qemu.org/docs/master/system/monitor.html>`_ to
stdin/stdout.
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request an IP address from our Liminix system and give you a shell you
can run ssh from.
We'll use `System Rescue <https://www.system-rescue.org/>`_ in tty
mode (no graphical output) for this purpose, but if you have some
We use `System Rescue <https://www.system-rescue.org/>`_ in tty
mode (no graphical output) for this example, but if you have some
other favourite Linux Live CD ISO - or, for that matter, any other OS
image that QEMU can boot - adjust the command to suit:
image that QEMU can boot - adjust the command to suit.
Download the System Rescue ISO:
.. code-block:: console
curl https://fastly-cdn.system-rescue.org/releases/10.01/systemrescue-10.01-amd64.iso -O
and run it
.. code-block:: console
nix-shell -p qemu --run " \
qemu-system-x86_64 \
-echr 16 \